2 Responses to “I am looking for some feedback rating my resume?”

1. Mike says:

   August 30, 2010 at 7:12 pm

   You have alot of problems with your resume.

   1.) You have employment gaps of several months. For example..What did you do between 08/2004-09/2005? You need to explain every gap.

   2/) You do not stay in a job very long. Any hiring manager will see this and wonder how many weeks or months you will stay in the job.

   3.) Accent your Education above your work record. You may want to eliminate jobs such as Taco Bell from the resume.

   Overall, the resume shows you are going down in the world, not up.

   Email me if you want more help.

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2. toneslilsweettease says:

   August 30, 2010 at 7:12 pm

   You might want to explain why you only stayed at some of the jobs a few months… employers don’t look favorable on that point.

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